ENGLISH-+JAKE

=EXPOSITION = =Children should receive $20 each week regardless of their behaviour and attitude. =

DISAGREE!!!!!!!!!

There is no way that children should receive twenty dollars each week regardless of their behaviour and their attitude.

If teachers didn't do their work properly they wouldn't get paid so why should kids?

If you get paid for not working when you grow up you will think works easy.

be Most jobs are hard so you will be changing jobs all the time. You will be doing this because you won't be able to find an easy job. Parents shouldn't pay their kids if their not doing any work because they won't be use to work.

If parents give children money all the time they won't be able to support themselves when they are adults.

The kids will be use to getting money for doing nothing. Kids need to learn how to earn money for themselves so when they have a family they already have these skills.These skills are very important to have.

If parents give kids money when they're not working for it they are most likely to spend it on unnecessary things

. They're probably going to buy a silly toy that they will only play with for a week. They will spend it on unnecessary things when you can buy some thing important like groceries. You need groceries so you can eat. Getting paid for not working could lead to the same pattern in adult life. Right now Australia is in debt an if kids grow up and get paid and their not working it could bring us into more debt. People who work for their money are proud then people who don't. If kids don't do their jobs the house will be messy. If the house is messy and teir friends are over they won't want to come back. if the house is mesy it will cause hygine problems.

Ihope I have conviced you pearents not to give their children pocket money unless they are working for it.

 This is a fantastic exposition Jake. You have structured your sentences and paragraphs well. Your arguments are very convincing. I am going home today and cutting out all of my children's pocket money - NO WORK NO PAY - our new house rule. Mrs W

WOW! This is an excellent written piece Jake. You make some excellent points about the importance of children learning important life skills. I hope that this represents your attitude to working hard as you grow older, I am sure it does and that you will.

Mr. V-T.  Dogs VS CATS

I believe that dogs are better than cats.

Dogs are better guards. You need good guards to protect the house. IF YOU HAD A CAT AS A GUARD AND SOMEONE WAS TRYINING TO BREAK IN THE CAT WOULD JUST RUN AWAY.

Dogs are more intelligent than cats. You can teach dogs how do tricks. Dogs are used to smell drugs ammunition.

Dogs will always stand by your side. If you don’t have any friends they will be your friends. Dogs are good companions. They are also having good hearts and if you look after them properly they will be friendly.

That is why I think dogs are better than cats.

