20+DOLLERS+POCKET+MONEY!!!

=$20:00 POCKET MONEY!!!!!! = = = =Do you think it is fair that children these days get $20:00 pocket money even if they don’t deserve it? Well I don’t. So I will tell you why children should not get $20:00 pocket money if they miss behave. = = = = = =If we are spoilt by getting$20:00 pocket money we will live a life of lazyness and getting what ever we want. Living a life like this could cause obesity and a short life. Our parents will be working all the time because we will be sitting around all day like a couch potato playing with all our new gadgets. = = = = = =Parents have to spend their money on bills not our pocket money. There are more important things that have to get payed such as electricity, water, food and more. Living a life with out some of these things would be very hard. Taking parents for granted is rude and selfish so don’t do it! = = = = = =Being greedy and spoilt can cause a mean attitude. Which means they may end up with no friends because they are bad to them. The spoilt child will expect every thing from their parents and they will get it! Being spoilt like this will make the children in this world grow up to be greedy people! = = = = = =Children shouldn’t get $20:00 pocket money if they miss behave. I don’t think this is fair and I hope that I have convinced you to think the same thing! = = = = = =!!!By Brianna Saunders!!! =

Brianna, just makes sure you check your spelling (e.g. miss behave & lazyness). Your points are good, but try to develop your arguements more by elaborating and explaining more. This will make your exposition more convinving. Mr. Bennett