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=Are you concerned with living in your own dirty rubbish? I know I am. I’m not a big fan of picking up my rubbish either, but after I did some research, I couldn't believe my eyes! I thought, paying for my plastic bag that I’m only going to use once, was a rip off. But now, I am passionate about it and with my argument about why people should have to pay for plastic bags will, I hope, inform you about this interesting argument. ( A very interesting opening statement Georgia) =
 * __Why people should have to pay for plastic bags. draft 1__**

=Firstly, the impact on the worlds wildlife and marine creatures from the plastic bags, is outrageous. The animals are living on edge ( what do you mean by living on edge - can you explain this further) and are at risk by getting caught up in them or attempting to eat them, then choking and unfortunately dieing from our irresponsible disposal of waste. (Well Done). =

=The more the people continue being selfish towards our environment, and destroy our beautiful land, the more they pay for it! Firstly, I would be very dissapointed about my selfish behavour, and secondly having to pay for it out of my pocket! Over a million seabirds and 100,000 marine life animals die every year from our plastic bags! ( You need to re write this paragraph it does not make sense) =

=Unfortunately, large amounts of fossil fuels were put in to make the plastic bags. During this production process, dangerous chemicals are used, and a large amount of waste is produced. In the UK in 2001 the amount of all plastic waste totalled 1,678,900 tonnes, and 24,710,000 in the US in 2000. We can not burn these plastic bags because it is very dangerous and unhealthy due to what has been used during production. (Great factual information) =

=What the government should put an effort into doing....= =Firstly they should supply free recyclable bags to every household, so they dont need to buy them. That will force people stop accepting the unhealthy, wasteful, damaging and unrecyclable plastic bags. (Georgia does this really relate to the idea of people paying for the palstic bags they use?). =

= In conclusion, I think people should stop thinking about themselves, and look around. There are many fish in the sea, and wonderful creatures for us all to enjoy!! = =By: Georgia !=

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 * This is a very interesting argument. Georgia you need to spend time re-reading your work, there are parts that do not make sense. You also need to make sure that your argument is consistent throughout the exposition. Your point was that people should pay for plastic bags - Mrs W **

=Are you concerned with living in your own dirty rubbish? I know I am. I’m not a big fan of picking up my rubbish either, but after I did some research, I couldn't believe my eyes! I thought, paying for my plastic bag that I’m only going to use once, was a rip off. But now, I am passionate about it and with my argument about why people should have to pay for plastic bags will, I hope, inform you about this interesting argument.=

=Firstly, the impact on the worlds wildlife and marine creatures from the plastic bags, is outrageous. The animals are living on edge for eg.. if we don't put our rubbish in the bin we will slowly be forced into living in our own dirty rubbish. we are also at risk by getting caught up in them or attempting to eat them, then choking and unfortunately dieing from our irresponsible disposal of waste.=

=The more the people continue being selfish towards our environment, and destroy our beautiful land, the more they pay for it by paying for every destroying plastic bags! Firstly, It would be very disappointing about this selfish **behavior** i have concerned all people on Australia. Secondly having to pay for it out of my pocket! Over a million seabirds and 100,000 marine life animals die every year from our plastic bags!=

=Unfortunately, large amounts of fossil fuels were put in to make the plastic bags. During this production process, dangerous chemicals are used, and a large amount of waste is produced. In the UK in 2001 the amount of all plastic waste totaled 1,678,900 tonnes, and 24,710,000 in the US in 2000. We can not burn these plastic bags because it is very dangerous and unhealthy due to what has been used during production.=

=What the government should put an effort into doing....= =Firstly they should supply free recyclable bags to every household, so they don't need to buy them. That will force people stop accepting the unhealthy, wasteful, damaging and unrecyclable plastic bags.=

= In conclusion, I think people should stop thinking about themselves, and look around. There are many fish in the sea, and wonderful creatures for us all to enjoy!! = =By: Georgia !=

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=Exposition-= =My exposition is about...= =That all children should receive $20 pocket money every week regardless of bad behavior and attitude!= =Agree or __Disagree__= =1. Because then the children are getting spoilt.= =2. If you have more then one child and you have like 2 children then you have lost $40.= =3. If you get money they are learning the easy way.= =4. Because your mum and dad are always spending money on you like... Food,bills, clothing, morgage.= =5. Parents need to work more.= =I believe that children should not get $20 pocket money per week, regardless of bad behaviour and attitude.= =First of all, money is earn't and to give or offer children this amounteach week during their young life without working in return may lead them up to develop a spoilt mentality and an expectation that they will receive money from you for a long time without any knowledge of how to be a good worker or how to behave appropriately with a positive attitude.= =Secondly this may cause parents to work harder and longer to keep these payments up to their children which will impact on family relationships, because this will cause them to become tired and possibly emotionally which in turn will take away quality time from the children.= =Thirdly young children do not have good budgeting skills an tend to waste their pocket money on something they do not need. also if their behaviour is unacceptable within the home and they are being rewarded with pocket money they will think they can behave badly and still be payed within their workplace.= =A parents pioraty is to provide food shelter and clothing for their family and keep a balanced between working and family time.= =for these resins i have stated above this is why i disagree that all children should receive $20 per week regardless of bad behaviour and attitude.= =Thank you. :)= =by: Georgia=

=**COMMUNICATION - INFORMATION REPORT**=

What is communication??

Communication is a way to send a message from one person to anther. Eg: television, radio or the telephone.

The Telephone.

The telephone was invented in 1876. The telephone has come a long way from then. __The first one were the very big phones__. (This sentence does not make sense - please reread it) Then in 2010, the touch phones like the newest Iphone 4 were made available. A telephone can do many things. Like call someone, or send a text message .(You need to include more factual information Georgia)

Things you can do on a computer.

You can do many things on a computer, you can send an email or msn. Msn I (is) also a way to talk to people instantly on the computer. You can also do sype (Skype) witch (which) is a way to see another person from the other side of the world. The computer was invented in the 1840’s

Symbols

The aboriginals used symbols/pictures to communicate **w**ith there (their) family by using symbols. They have particular symbols for different reasons. (I know that you know more about the ways in which Aboriginal people use symbols and pictures to communicate - I don't know why you haven't included more information and details)

Now you know what communication is!!! Hope you learnt something!!! Georgia you have structured your ideas into paragraphs well. You have not included enough information - there needs to be more detail in all of your points. Take your time Georgia and reread your work carefully. Mrs W