ENGLISH-+J.T

Communication

//There are many ways that people communicate.//

//There are lots of ways people communicate to other diffrent people use like MSN & FASEBOOK.//

//other people. Communication has been around for a long time.// Telephone

The Telephone have been around for a long time. People all over the world use this to communicate to people. People use this to send Massages & photoes to each other

Braille

Lewis Braille invented Braille because when he was helping his dad in his work shop. He stabbed his eye with a sharp tool witch is used to put hole in the shoe. So he invented Braille for lots of blind people who need it like him. Computers

People all over the world use computers to communicate. Kids don’t use computers because computers thay have bad things on the internet thay could look something rilly bad up and it won't be good.

People use all different types of communication E.g such as facebook and msn.

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Exposition

My exposition is that kids should not be aloud allowed to get 20.00 a week. Please kids read my arguments why kids should not get 20.00 a week. See if it is fair.

If kids get 20.00 a week they are just going to spend it on what you don’t need. So think about it. Parents have other cost to pay for. Parents have to pay for your house, electricity, bills, mortgage, and a lot more things. If you don't have food, water or shelter you have a chance of dying.

Waisting family money is very bad. you are just going to affect your self. if you waist family money you have a chance of being homeless and you got no money.Waisting family money is very bad because you could be going out to dinner at a nice restront. If you don't have any money you can die because you can not buy food or water.

Children should not be reworded for there bad behaviour. one resone why children should not get $20 a week is that thier bad behavour. they realy need to learn the hard way. another reson that children shouldnt be reworded for thier bad behavour because when they get married thier house is going to be a mess. my finnal resone is that the children will be un responsable and they will be bad kids.

Thankyou kids. I hope i have told you why children should get $20 a week. I hope you now think its fair.


 * TITLE - WHAT TITLE ARE YOU GOING TO GIVE YOUR EXPOSITION. WHAT IS IT THAT YOU ARE TRYING TO CONVINCE PEOPLE ABOUT ||
 * TITLE - Children should not be allowed to bring phones and ipods to school. ||
 * INTRODUCTION - TELL THE READER WHAT YOUR OPINION IS

THIS IS WHAT I BELIEVE. I do not think that children should not be aloud to bring phones or ipods to school.

SOME INFORMATION ABOUT YOUR TOPIC. Children might use their phone to cheat. They can be distracted during class and they might distract other people. || cheating
 * ARGUMENT ONE
 * ARGUMENT ONE

I BELIEVE THIS I think that children might use their phone to cheat.

THE REASONS I BELIEVE THIS ARE... When thay get a esesment they can cheat by looking up the ancer up on google and useing a caculater FACT OR AN EXAMPLE TO PROVE YOUR POINT || geting distracted I BELIEVE THIS Their phone might distract them form work.
 * [[image:http://www.google.com.au/url?source=imgres&ct=img&q=http://farm1.static.flickr.com/176/474803623_a7085d6cce.jpg&sa=X&ei=t0mkTKemMY-yvgPs8On6DA&ved=0CAQQ8wc4Aw&usg=AFQjCNEzgUq_dEVV6cM3B4dQLcUNAetw7Q width="157" height="114"]] cheating on a test with a ipod .   ||
 * ARGUMENT TWO

THE REASONS I BELIEVE THIS ARE... There phones can ring or thay can get a message and it will distract people around tham.

FACT OR AN EXAMPLE TO PROVE YOUR POINT || won't learn I BELIEVE THIS Thay won't learn and when thay get to high school thay will have trubble THE REASONS I BELIEVE THIS ARE... when thay finish school thay will get a bad job a get fired all the time. FACT OR AN EXAMPLE TO PROVE YOUR POINT || A LITTLE BIT OF INFORMATION ABOUT EACH POINT YOU HAVE MADE. These ar only 3 resons there is 1000 of resons and i hope i have told you why it is not good to cheat and that you will get a bad job. ||
 * [[image:http://www.onlinedegrees.org/wp-content/uploads/phone-cheating.jpg width="179" height="145"]] THIS IS WHAT I MEAN BY CHEATING ON A TEST WITH A PHONE . ||
 * ARGUMENT THREE
 * [[image:http://www.google.com.au/url?source=imgres&ct=tbn&q=http://theapostolicreport.files.wordpress.com/2008/12/cheating1.jpg&sa=X&ei=x0qkTIqKG4WmvgPBi4XvDA&ved=0CAUQ8wc4JQ&usg=AFQjCNFPhXq4NP_C7eBS03b8Y8R3Xi0zkA width="153" height="103"]] All different ways people cheat with phones. ||
 * SUMMARY