HOMEWORK-CM

Intro  Dogs make better pets than cats because of a number of reasons.

 Cats are very fickle and can turn on you more than dogs do. You need to explain this point further and use some examples

 It's easier to train dogs than cats because dogs are loyal and obedient. Great introductory sentence  You can train dogs by giving them rewards such as treats.

 You can teach dogs to do tricks such as: sit, drop, roll, shake hands, fetch and lots more. However, cats cannot do this.

 Conclusion  Therefore, dogs make better pets than cats because they are more loving, respectful an - **this doesn't make sense. **


 * Connor you have included some relevant and convincing arguments. However you seem to have only written an introductory sentences for each argument. You need to include more supporting details and examples to strengthen each of your arguments. Keep Trying Connor - Mrs W **