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Communication = Communication is what people like you use to communicate. Some of the things are Phones, Braille, Mores code and Computers. Phones have changed from the early days because the phones we have today are a lot easier to use and are really they had a long time ago were a lot harder to use. Braille is something that people with disabilities use. Braille is little bumps that stick up. There are lots of ways Braille is used. = = Computers have changed since 1975 to now. Some of the computers are really good and some are not as good as some computers. Sometime computers are very helpful. Communication is very good because it is a lot easyer. =

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I think parents all over the world should give their kids $20 each week. It dose not matter if they have poor behaviour.

Kids should get $20 because they can spend it when they want. Kids can buy what they want when they are older. When they are older they can buy a car and a house. now (Now) can you see why kids should get $20 each week.

Kids should get $20 because they should learn to save. If kids save later in their life, they can buy something they like. If you save later in your life, you can give your kids $20 dollars as well.That is why kids should get $20 each week.

If kids get $20 each week they can buy a game to leave their perants (parents) alone. If kids buy a game perants (SP) don't hav (SP) to keep them entertaned(SP). If kids buy a game, perants (SP) like my mum don't have to yell and scream. That is why kids shoud buy a game with their $20.

I believe that kids should get $20 so they can save and buy stuff when they are older. That is why kids should get $20.

Well Done - I'm not completely convinced that children should get 20 dollars a week spending money despite their behaviour. I like the way you are using sentences and grouping your ideas into paragraphs. You have also included some very convincing supporting arguments. Remember to check your work for simple spelling mistakes and try to use more detail in your writing. Mrs W